Success 成功

When it comes to success, different people have different opinions about what makes it come true. Some people regard hard-working as an essential quality to success while others believe being clever would lead to success.From my point of view, I think perseverance and hard-working are indispensable for those who want to make an achievement.

谈到成功时，对于实现成功的原因不同的人有不同的看法。有些人认为勤奋是成功必备的素质，而另一些人则相信聪明人会实现成功。从我的角度来看，我认为毅力和勤奋对于那些想要成功的人是必不可少的。

Firstly, perseverance let people step closely towards success. Most people want to make a big difference to prove their value. People who set their goal and keep moving would make their dream come true. However, there are some people who set their goal but they stop at the difficulty would fail in theend. I think the difference between success and failure is perseverance. If wehave perseverance, even if we are not clever, we will make a great difference,but if we not, we are doomed to lose. As we all know, Edison is a great inventor in the world. However, before he invented the bulb, he kept trying for tens of thousands of times to find a suitable wire. Let us imagine, if he gaveup at the 999th, then how he couldn’t become so successful. So, I strongly believe that perseverance produces success.

首先，毅力让人离成功越来越近。大多数人都想用不同的方式证明自己的价值。设定自己的目标，向着目标走，就可以使梦想成真了。然而，有些人设立了目标，却在困难面前妥协了将以失败告终。我认为成功与失败之间的差别是毅力。如果我们有毅力，即使我们不聪明，我们也会有很大的不同，但是如果我们没有毅力，我们注定是要失败的。我们都知道，爱迪生是一位伟大的发明家。但是，在他发明电灯泡前，他试了为数千次去找一个合适的线。让我们想象一下，如果他在第九百九十九次放弃了，那么他就不可能变得如此成功。因此，我强烈认为，坚持就会成功。

Secondly, there is also a kind of people who are born with cleverness, I think they are lucky. Nevertheless, if they don’tmake a hard work on their way to their goal, they, absolutely, will becomeloser. Whether we are gifted for intelligent, we must be hard-working so as tosuccess. I regard hard-working as an efficient approach to be successful because I believe ‘pains and gains’. As for those who do not make great efforts on work, failure follows. In old times,there is a clever boy who can make excellent poem when he can talk. When his father found the little child’s cleverness, he just let the child make poems to show around while never let the boy learned anything. When the boy grew up,people forgot him because he lost the ability to compose poems and became ordinary as others. From this matter, we can see that only by hard-working canwe get knowledge and make a good future.

其次，还有一种人是天生聪明的，他们是幸运的。然而，如果他们没有在实现目标之前努力工作，他们当然也会成为失败者。无论我们是否有天资，我们都应该努力工作以获得成功。我认为勤奋是成功的一个有效的方法，因为我相信的“付出和收获”。对于那些不努力工作的人最后是失败的了。在古代，有一个聪明的男孩，在他能说话的时候就可以作优秀的诗歌。当他的父亲发现他孩子的聪明时，他只是让孩子到处作诗歌来炫耀，却从不让他儿子学习别的知识。孩子长大后，人们把他遗忘了，因为他失去了创作能力，成为了普通人。从这件事中，我们可以看到，只有通过努力工作才能获得知识，拥有一个好的未来。

Anyway, I think perseverance and hard-working are both important in ourway to success for they enhance us and produce success.

不管怎么样，我觉得毅力和勤奋在成功路上都是很重要的，因为他们提升我们并获得成功。


成功之路 The road to success


Everyone tries to achieve success in his career. However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails. Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway. Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of solid preparation and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything. I believe that where there is a preparation there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.

每个人都想在事业上取得成功。然而，有人坚定地达到他的目标，而另一个失败。为什么？一个人继续他的事业，通过长期的努力奋斗，但另一个是容易失望或中途停止。良好的准备，毅力和勤奋是成功的三大要素。一个有着坚实的准备和毅力的人总有一种不灵活的精神。无论多么艰难，他坚持自己的事业。孙中山先生是这样一个人。他的许多次尝试失败了，但他坚持他的目标坚定，最后成功地推翻了清王朝。勤奋意味着在一个人的学习和工作的稳定性。苏秦自己为了让自己专心学习。马克思经常每天工作15个小时。生命是短暂的，我们有很多事情要做。没有勤奋，没有人能取得任何成就。我相信，有一个有准备的地方，有一种方法，成功属于那些能忍受长期忍耐和不断努力的人。


What Is Success? 什么是成功？


Directions: In this part, you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Your composition must be based on the information given in the outline below.