Jan. 28,2009

Dear Sir or Madam,   

    I am a girl of seventeen. What I'd like to say first of all is that I have been longing to be admitted into Tongji University since my childhood, for it is the best university in which one can study architecture.

    I've been interested in science and engineering, especially architecture since I was about five. I began learning painting at ten, and I've visited many beautiful cities including Beijing and Qingdao to see the typical ancient or western buildings.As one of the fans of Bei Yuming (贝聿铭), I appreciate his famous designs and visited his latest works,Suzhou Museum.My ambition is to become an architect like him.To realize my dream,I study hard and all my examination records are among the best. I've got some prizes in my hobbies,watercolor painting and swimming the best.I've got some prize in my hobbies, watercolor painting and swimming,and as an  athlete ,I'm healthy enough to face the toughest task in the university.
    Surely I am among the best candidates, and I hope you will be so kind as to  co-nsider my application.Thanks.
                                                                                                                                     Yours truly,
                                                                                                                                      Huang Lei