2015高考英语一轮短文改错复习题有解析(3)

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10. problem改为problems
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(2014届浙江省湖州中学高三上学期期中考试)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
【答案】
1. 加上for
2. past → passed
3. feet → foot
4. when → than
5. a → the
6. other → another
7. do → did
8. possible → possibly
9. 去掉it
10. lose → losing
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(2014届辽宁省抚顺市六校联合体高三上学期期中考试)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;x k b 1
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
      2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As students, all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first? Here are some differe nt ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major firs t so they can learn that they are interested in. In this way they can put their he arts into study and got their  favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to one’s develop and that graduates from key universities  are more likely to find good jobs. As long as I’m concerned, the best choice is a good university if we can’t obtain all.
【答案】
1. faced后面加上with
2. passed改成passing
3. and改成or
4. Some后面的more 去掉
5. learn后面的that改成what
6. got改成get
7. Other改成Others
8. develop改成development
9. long改成far
10. all改成both
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(2014届吉林省长春外国语学校高三上学期期中考试)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;5ykj.com
      2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
I’m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example,
when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might          
fall off my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, w ith
my mother even carried a first-aid box. I’m not  free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not
let me ride alone?” Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything
for his children. This does no good on them. Too many love from parents may prevent
children from independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do t hat they
should do alone. 
【答案】
1. worried—worry/加are
2. 去掉to
3. the--a
4. carried—carrying
5. angry—angrily
6. his--their
7. family--families
8. many--much
9. on--to
10. that--what