Hi, Janice, It's been a month since I came to this

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Hi, Janice,
  It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the
problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three  new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and
after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays
now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grave

 

 

1. 在want和share 之间加上to
2. tell改为 told
3. friend 改为friends 
4. sing 改为singing
5. many改为 much 
6. so改为 but 
7. How改为 What
8. are 改为were
9. him 改为them
10. 去掉with